#SpringFlingKidLit contest entry: FLORY’S FAIRY WINGS
Thank you for this delightful Spring Fling Kid Lit contest opportunity hosted by Kaitlyn Leann Sanchez and Ciara O’Neal. There are also some amazing prize donors! You can shower our hosts and prize donors with love by visiting their blogs, following on social media, and viewing their amazing books.
I found my gif HERE.
I now present my tiny tale introducing Flory, The Garden Fairy.
FLORY’S FAIRY WINGS
By
Christine Alemshah
WC: 149
At graduation, Flory and her fairy friends debuted wings displaying their true power.
Willow’s green wings cascaded a flowering arch.
Phoenix’s fiery wings transformed her into a bird.
Amaya’s silver wings showered everyone in light rain.
Flory touched her back. Nothing. Her smile quivered at her turn. She ran to the ice cream shop instead.
“I’ll never be a real fairy without wings.”
A boy in front of her pulled at empty pockets.
Flory handed him a coin.
“My treat,” she said.
“Thank you,” the boy replied.
Prr-ing! Golden wings sprouted on Flory’s back.
Flory puzzled.
The boy ran to help an old fairy tie shoes he couldn’t reach.
I get it now, thought Flory.
She ran back to graduation.
“Oh, Flory,” said Amaya.
“They’re beautiful,” said Phoenix.
“What’s your power?,” asked Willow.
Flory smiled. “Something measured, yet unseen. I spread kindness forward one fairy at a time.”
38 Comments
Jill Lambert
Such a sweet fantasy, Christine! Great job!
Christine Marie Alemshah
Aww thank you, Jill! I had hoped the fantasy aspect came across!
Rozana
What a beautiful tale of kindness! Love it! Good luck.
Christine Marie Alemshah
Thank you, Rozana!
Andrew Hacket
Great message in this magical tale!
Christine Marie Alemshah
Thanks, Andrew!
Anjali Amit
Fairies and fantasy. A lovely tale of kindness rewarded.
Christine Marie Alemshah
Thank you, Anjali!
Bonnie Kelso
Awww, this is so magical! Great job, Christine! Kindness is the greatest super-power of all. 🙂
Maria LaPlaca Bohrer
Beautiful sweet tale! Good luck!
Dee
A really lovely fantasy. Love that her gift is kindness, great message.
Sarah Meade
Lovely! I enjoyed your wonderful theme and magical main character.
Pat Haapaniemi
Lovely story!
Charlotte dixon
Kindness in all its loveliness-well done!
Dena Davis
This is so sweet!
Christine Marie Alemshah
Thank you, Dena!
Mona Voelkel
This is a gorgeous story with a beautiful message! Your great opening sentence drew me in right away!!! good luck in the contest!
Christine Marie Alemshah
Aw – thank you so much! You don’t know how much that means to me! Thank you for visiting!
Christine Marie Alemshah
Thank you, Mona! I’m so glad you loved the opening! =)
Armineh Manookian
Love the theme of kindness and watching it spread from one (fairy) to another.!
Christine Marie Alemshah
Thanks very much for reading Flory’s story!
Lori Sheroan
Your description brings the characters to life!
Christine Marie Alemshah
Aw thank you so much! I actually have it on my to-do list to create a chapter series from these characters at some point!
Susan Elizabeth Schipper
Love the descriptions and theme of Kindness!! 🙂
Christine Marie Alemshah
Thank you so much! I’m so glad the kindness theme came across! Thanks for stopping by!
Kaitlyn L Sanchez
Aw how sweet and what beautiful imagery in your words! Thanks for sharing with us!
Christine Marie Alemshah
Thank you, Kaitlyn. I appreciate you visiting my blog and reading my story!
Melissa-Jane Nguyen
Adorable story, Christine!
Colleen Dougherty
So sweet! I was so intrigued when I saw your GIF! Thanks for sharing:)
Connie Bergstein Dow
Such a wonderful story about kindness!
Christine Marie Alemshah
Thank you so much for reading my story! I’m so glad you enjoyed it!
Colleen O Murphy
I love your GIF and your message! Good luck!
Christine Marie Alemshah
Thank you, Colleen!
Ciara O'Neal
You have a tiny creative little world here. And I love the kindness power!
Christine Marie Alemshah
Aww thank you so much for visiting and reading Flory’s story! I hope to expand their tiny world with more adventures soon.
Karen Pickrell
What a magical message! Best wishes in the contest!
Molly
What a super sweet ending! Loved your little spring time fairy tale! 💕 Good Luck!
Lauri Meyers
Cute!